Very good job on this poem! So sad! 5/5

There's poems I read..
That I can't figure out if I like them as I read..
Ya know.
And, then the end just.. makes me fall in love with it.
Right?
Yours did that.
All but the last stanza was okay.
It wasn't GREAT but it defintally wasn't bad.
And, the last stanza, just was great.
I loved it.
Fixed the whole... middleish poem.
Lol.
Great Job, Hun.
Keep up the good work.
5/5

Hmmmmmmmm u say ur not good at writing snd u wont even believe me but u r a fantastic writer 10/5 fo' sho'