by missy Dec 9, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
I sat today in front of my computer, |
by true lover
You are a great writer i wish i had your talent!! Keep praying!! |
by ALEX
Good poem. maybe needs a little more thinking to the rhythm and stuff, but i love the idea. great job!! |
by SNUG
That was Great, that's how the world is and you just put it in word the best way I've ever seen... |
by heather
I love this poem! i love the way you see things and then put them into words. thanks for the comments on mine too! really great job!!!!! |
I wont tell you "OMG I LOVE YOUR POEM",not because i dont think so but because its hypocritisism and too ordinary(as i see above)...however,after reading your poem i was wondering:ive read so many books and poems about changes and world peace etc,but why cant we try ourselves to change the world or at least try to leave it better to our children instead of just w8ing until everything happens by it self?because it never will... |