Wwooowwww.....
That was... excellent. So Very very true! very powerful poem. we are all feeling the same waiting for something better. a change.

This was an EXCELLENT poem. 5/5. wow. great work.

-Suzie

Hi i was reading ur poems after u commented mine (no one understands) and this poem is amazing, sums up so many feelings in so few words. well done and thanks for the support on my poem!

I wont tell you "OMG I LOVE YOUR POEM",not because i dont think so but because its hypocritisism and too ordinary(as i see above)...however,after reading your poem i was wondering:ive read so many books and poems about changes and world peace etc,but why cant we try ourselves to change the world or at least try to leave it better to our children instead of just w8ing until everything happens by it self?because it never will...

I love this poem! i love the way you see things and then put them into words. thanks for the comments on mine too! really great job!!!!!

That was Great, that's how the world is and you just put it in word the best way I've ever seen...

Good poem. maybe needs a little more thinking to the rhythm and stuff, but i love the idea. great job!!

Parker

You are a great writer i wish i had your talent!! Keep praying!!