by Gem Dec 9, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You think I would have broken |
Awesome..it came from your heart, you didnt dress up the words which was what made it so real. one of my faves. |
I really like this! I can totally relate to this right now with one of my friends. *cough, cough* She is just *ugh* anyways, great poem sweetums! |
+.+ Hahah, i hope u get over ur writers block, i hate it when that happens. :( |
by *Charisma*
Not a fav of mine, and lol to the writers block. The second stanza is off in flow and the second line in the second stanza has a grammar error I believe. Thanks for all your sweet comments and 1st place! |
by ABake
Thats good.... i can relate to it...friendship poems are sumtimes hard to write but this one was written well! |