Love Like Rain

by fearose   Dec 9, 2006


Malice rises in the air with the tribal smoke from the ash-laden fire. I smell the thick soot, dread collecting in my throat, scorching it with sorrow.

There you are, figure wavering in the hot smoke across the way. I smile at you but you ignore my plea to be back with you and I know hope is lost.

Suddenly, lightning rockets across the sky, followed by witty rain, smothering the fire in a billow of smoke. I stand and look up, letting the rain fall on my face.

Let the rain slip between my fingers like our love that used to be so dear. Hanging on a thread, suspended between two knives, ready to snap.

Goodbye my love...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Wow...amazingly beautiful.... your use of words is incredible.... i love how you can paint such a picture in the mind and how you can make someone almost feel your heart break ...5/5 without a doubt

  • 18 years ago

    by KelseyinWonderland

    Excellent! The title grabs your attention and the overall poem is amazing!

    ~K3!$3Y~

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    I just love your poems now!! =] And I really liked this one, a lot!! The ending was great!! I don't really have much else to say about this...lol. take care!

    `Poetess

  • 18 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a good poem, great flow and structure, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!