This is a good poem, great flow and structure, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I just love your poems now!! =] And I really liked this one, a lot!! The ending was great!! I don't really have much else to say about this...lol. take care!

`Poetess

Excellent! The title grabs your attention and the overall poem is amazing!

~K3!$3Y~

Wow...amazingly beautiful.... your use of words is incredible.... i love how you can paint such a picture in the mind and how you can make someone almost feel your heart break ...5/5 without a doubt