Omg...you have such wonderful talent...i truly enjoy reading your poetry...

Such a tender poem.. the best poems are the ones when the emotion spills into the words and your excellent at doing that.
"with a sparkle in her eyes, the way I believed in fairy-tales,
The way I thought true love would never die?"

A very fitting ending. Brill poem overall
5/5
*Gem*

Very beautifully written.
i like a lot.
=]

I can feel where you r truly coming from!! well done

A very beautiful poem with such deep meaning. Thank you so much for all the comments they are very much appreciated = ]
xxBonnie

Aw that was really sad. a very touching piece lot of emotion in it.

Nice!! =) 5/5. Keep it up ;) (sorry I'm not very good at commeting but I really love it =))

Your love did not die. You still have it in your heart and waiting for you in heaven! Sad penned emotions bring tears to the eye.........

I'm sure he misses you...but he would want you to be strong and hold on...
A beautifully written sad piece.

Awww thats good, but true love never really does die... although it does feel like that when its gone... but its still there. xxx be strong xxx