I feel this poem is unfinished u may want to take it back out revise legnthen it up a little n then repost it might help it has a good flow but the ending is abrupt wich makes a point but no visualisations n thats a good key of poetry is visualisations

Bleeding demons, made a good point. I have found out, that sometimes i can inspire my self with poems i've writen. Sometimes we find something amazing just by taking a second look. Like one poem can open a door to emotions, while the next is us walking through.

One way love, is a sad truth. That those we need may not always need us so they simple arent there. HOld you in good times, leave you in bad.
"If you don't act soon.
All the hate in my heart
Will only add to the strain.
And Everything you do
Will only add to the pain."
I think that is the sadest truth of it all. Like the rhythem, and how its so easy to relate.