Wow i dont even know what to say!! 5/5

Bryan, I loved it!!!! It had fantastic flow and the rhyme was great!! I know what you are going through, just had a kinda bad breakup so i know what it's like to just sit and wish the other person still felt the same way about you as you do them.... anyway, I'm rambling... Great job hun. I really liked this one a lot! No wonder you are on my favorite list! =]

♥ Miss Ciao Bella

Great poem with a great meaning.
I also like the flow and the rhyming. great job once again.

That is a beautiful poem. i know the feeling. 5/5

How Beautiful yet sad. Bryan you have such a wonderful way of expressing things. The pain of the broken heart can be felt so strongly in this piece. Excellent job! Take care Cindy

This is great awesome work even though this i think is one of your older poems it is still really awesome great job!! and thanks for the comment

keenan

That was so awsome thats how i feel! great job!