Wow...that's strong emotions and your very open about it. The ending was one that really hits you and makes people think about your situation. I can relate somewhat having a difficult period where i too would slash my arms and any part of my body with a blade and stay up all night. I hope for you that your soul will live on and get stronger as the days proceed. OH and don't feel nervous about writing, your poem is intense and keeps people on the edge, you have talent.....
If ever you need to talk you can always send an e-mail or something, just hang on!

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That was a very good poem!!i love how you write!your a truly good writer

For a first poem it's very good. Very emotional - sad, but powerful. The imagery is pretty vivid and the rhymes made it easier to read.
Good work!
5/5

Really just wow,good job honey 5/5

Really just wow,good job honey 5/5

Your extremely deep and the pain that you expressed bout brought tears to my eyes because i know what it's like to have someone you love so much leave you and them have no remorse, it's a pain you'll never quiet get over....take care
~*~Amber~*~

This is awesome... I absolutly loved this. It reminds me of some of the things I've written... When I started reading it, I was quickly drawn to it. Then I noticed how long it was, but it was so amazing that I couldn't help but finish it. Wonderful work. I think you've become one of my favorite poets =]

I usually HATE long poems because i just loose interest but this kept me reading, good work. laura xx

I loved it thanks for the comment.
and i am serious
this chick is takin him away from me.
but last nite he said he loved me.
and now all i can do is cry.

Hey thanks for the comment.
i love this poem
i can really relate specially to
"Since you're a permanent reminder
Of a time when I felt happiness.
To let go would be so much kinder."
5/5
and a fav.

Death is the end of pain.....but not sadness