My death

by The Saber   Dec 10, 2006


Were should i go is not the question
the question you need to ask your self is
when will i go and will i be scared
see through out my life i have learned a lot
of things like if you are not scared of death
and get depressed then you have a much better
chance of killing your self
you are asking how i know well let me tell you
i am going through it all over again
and to be quit honest this time
i think i will take a different route in which i cant stop
my decision like lets say jumping off a building or stabbing
my heart out or lighting my self on fire then jumping
into some dry leafs and just lighting the place up
ha ha wow i have a lot of ideas what to do with them
should i act on them or just let them pass
i have no clue yet so lets see if i find the answer
some time soon i hope i do cause i will just end
up making my own decision and it will be the selfish decision
i am done caring if i hurt people i just wanna see some one else
suffer now there turn not mine now the see how it feels
to watch every thing they love go up in flame and watch the
ones they love die watch all of them just die

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    I truely agree wth missy..suicide is not the only way to get ride of ur pains sometimes after attempting life becomes even harder to live. i know we cant understand wht pain u have gone throu but this is life n ups n downs r part of it god made human strong enough to face life's ups n downs so just be strong n see the bright side of life...
    u have talent to express keep it up
    God bless u!!

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    Its good = ) could use some verses though

  • 17 years ago

    by missy

    Okay, that's pretty depressing. I just hope you know that attempt doesn't always bring you the right answers or even lets you meet death. You say up in flames or stabbing yourself, but I have a friend who slit her wrist real bad and didnt die. My father when I was young swallowed two pill bottles, got rushed to the hospital and the pumped out his stomach in time. Just last year my father filled his room with propane and went up in flames but once again got rushed to the hospital, spent 40 days in a coma on a ventilater (gives him oxygen, he couldn't breathe on his own) and he's alive today, but with severe burns and a sore foot. So sometimes suicide is not the answer and when it's not a lot more pain follows....Think about it...

  • 17 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Very full of emotion

    is it anger at the world?

    g xx

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