Great poem. I really liked this. Very deep.

I agree with Dave ^^ Very profound!

"In this hollow place
My pen in hand
I write in the dark
I take a stand"

I loved your opening to this one. It immediantly set the scene and tone for what the rest of the poem would be.
Nicely done =)
5/5 as always
*Gem*

(And yeah, the bleh was me saying i didn't like it, i think i could have done better, i may edit it in the future when my mood cheers up, lol)

This was really good. Very descriptive, and detailed. Amazing imagery. & I , as well, agree with what Dave said. It is funny. And everyone should have a place like this.. Lol, even though. I don't! But, bleh.

I didn't quite get the very last line:

And it could one for you create

^^ IDK! maybe i'm just blonde.. but I didn't understand it. or what it meant. Lol. sorry, but i loved everything else!

Amazing job. Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x