Hidden Soul {Cinquain}

by dollwithafrown   Dec 10, 2006


A soul
Hidden in lace
Broken, torn, destroyed
Laying there, scattered in pieces
Alone

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A Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting
of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2,
in five lines.

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My first ever Cinquain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow, very deep poem. I enjoyed it a lot. This type of poem is so interesting and you did such a wonderful job at executing it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Omgosh amazing! definitoy my favorite poem out of the ones i've read.. i wish i could say more but i cant.. its just amazing. really spectacular.. NICE WRITE!

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow, your first? I'll give you a 5/5. Great Cinquain.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good job on this. The short forms are difficult to write because you have so few syllables and/or lines to get a message across. Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Short and Sweet. showed your emotion well. another well written poem.

    -/2 Terra

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