It must've been hard to write! lol! ut i think it is mega good! n i liked the structure of it!

Totally don't get the type of poem, but i loved it! lol, i'm not good with those different types of poems... it was good though, a lot of emotion in simple words... nice job 5/5

This is another great poem by you, written greatly. keep it up.

Wow, It was a great poem. I'll have to try writing one of these too. Hope mine turns out as good as yours.

Another great poem . I never understood a Cinquain XD But this was well written(: Keep it up .
..__MiNDYY

I love this.
So short but so much meaning.
I enjoyed the imagery and the wording was a pleasure to read.

I really envy any one who can get such depth into such a short poem. Have never been able to. I have tried, but they seem to fall short in standard.

Wonderful job
Jeannie

This was really good, even though it was short you got the message around and i like how you ended it with Alone. i just liked it.

Short and Sweet. showed your emotion well. another well written poem.

-/2 Terra

Good job on this. The short forms are difficult to write because you have so few syllables and/or lines to get a message across. Well done!

Wow, your first? I'll give you a 5/5. Great Cinquain.

Omgosh amazing! definitoy my favorite poem out of the ones i've read.. i wish i could say more but i cant.. its just amazing. really spectacular.. NICE WRITE!

Wow, very deep poem. I enjoyed it a lot. This type of poem is so interesting and you did such a wonderful job at executing it. 5/5