by dollwithafrown Dec 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A hidden soul is her recipe |
by Dark Kitten
It's easy to hide away in fear and not let anything happen that could hurt one worse than one already has been hurt. But if one never takes the risk, one never will experience the good things in life. Very nice read. I can tell you I've never been able to do restricted poems like that, myself. lol. |
I really like it, i like the usage of repitition, and that your name iis also hidden soul. Lol. Exceleltn vocab in this one, and it had great imagery! This poem also had great meaning in the words, it was really deep. Had a great flow! Its a great poem overall, Keep it up! Look forward to reading more. xx |
I love this poem. again.. lol all your poem are all rad so far.. and i relaly like the line a hidden soul is her recipice.. its clever.. and poetic.. nice job! |
An amazing poem =) you have a great talent;) 5/5 |
by Mommy And Me
Again a wonderfully written poem. it really hit me deep. lol showed who i was once apon a time.. lol great work |