I really liked that... i liked the idea, something a lot of ppl can relate to... nice vocab, and i liked how you made the hidden soul her "recipe", i love metaphors, i think they really add depth and meaning to a poem... really nice job 5/5

I liked, but didn't fully get! a hidden soul is her recipe is mint, but i think u can do uch better than that coz it was kinda confuzzling!

This is neet, I've never done a poem like it before I will have to try it some time.

Wow i like this poem alot as well, great write. 5/5

Interesting, pretty dark. I liked it. This style of writing looks really hard to do, I might try it sometime.

Very nicely done! Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5

~tay~

I really enjoy formed poetry. Overall you did a good job. The only thing I would change is not to say harmful twice in the second to last stanza. Keep writing!

I liked your poem, i liked the way you used 'recipe' thats a good idea!!!!!! 10/10 well done!!!!! oxoxoxoxoxo:)
Choi,
Darling!!! xxx

I liked this.
I thought the repetition was nicely done, along with the wording.
The imagery was amazing.

I liked this poem but not as much as your other ones, it was still good i just think it could've ended differently. but it was still good 4/5

Again a wonderfully written poem. it really hit me deep. lol showed who i was once apon a time.. lol great work

An amazing poem =) you have a great talent;) 5/5

I love this poem. again.. lol all your poem are all rad so far.. and i relaly like the line a hidden soul is her recipice.. its clever.. and poetic.. nice job!

I really like it, i like the usage of repitition, and that your name iis also hidden soul. Lol. Exceleltn vocab in this one, and it had great imagery! This poem also had great meaning in the words, it was really deep. Had a great flow! Its a great poem overall, Keep it up! Look forward to reading more. xx

It's easy to hide away in fear and not let anything happen that could hurt one worse than one already has been hurt. But if one never takes the risk, one never will experience the good things in life. Very nice read. I can tell you I've never been able to do restricted poems like that, myself. lol.