by N J Thornton
It was good. A little on the overused subject side in my opinion, but I know a lot of other people like this sort of thing. |
Its good. itd prolly be better as a song. |
This is really good, you can really tel that it's kinda song lyrics, it may sound batter as a song but its great as a poem also nice job 5/5 |
I really liked that. It's good that you said it was meant to be a song, but I really think those words work well as lyrics. That's why I enjoyed the repitition. I think it worked well with this. |
by Batman
OMG...thats so good....*hugs you* |
The past is near |
by hippiehxc
This is SO good. I love it. |