You became my friend

by Kayla Katastrophe   Dec 10, 2006


My life was shattered
My heart turned cold
I'll never be happy
That's what I've been told

I walked the earth
With no hope at all
I was pushed off the cliff
I wasn't saved from the fall

That's when you showed up
You became my friend
You provided me comfort
When it felt like the end

You brought me joy
You saved my life
In this chamber of darkness
You brought the light

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I really enjoyed this whole poem. The imagery, the rhyming, and the flow were just right. It was a good length, and it had sweet subject matter. Truly heartfelt. A beautiful piece! I loved how you said
    I was pushed off the cliff
    I wasn't saved from the fall
    That's not something normally put. They'd normally say...
    I was pushed off the cliff
    But you broke my fall.
    I like that you had it where you did fall, you had hard times, but your friend was there to help you through it, but not necesarily save you from it. Good job!
    Charisma*

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