Comments : You became my friend

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I really enjoyed this whole poem. The imagery, the rhyming, and the flow were just right. It was a good length, and it had sweet subject matter. Truly heartfelt. A beautiful piece! I loved how you said
    I was pushed off the cliff
    I wasn't saved from the fall
    That's not something normally put. They'd normally say...
    I was pushed off the cliff
    But you broke my fall.
    I like that you had it where you did fall, you had hard times, but your friend was there to help you through it, but not necesarily save you from it. Good job!
    Charisma*