What else can I say but beautiful and sad at the same time.

Aww. That was a very beautiful poem to read. =] Made me smile. I can definately tell they mean an awfully lot to you! You're got talent, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Sounds like there is much love to share amongst your family. I loved this poem. It definetly made me laugh and smile, I think that if you can make people smile through writing a poem, You definetly have a spark, a talent in your writing.
xxBonnie

Wow. This is a definite piece of work. This is something I'd engrave in stone, or something along the sorts.

This is the first poem of yours i've read so far and its such a nice poem! your so talented I'm going to definitely read the rest of your poems!! :D

Aw that was so beautiful i really liked this poem. very beautifully written. great job on it =) xx

Ahem...a lil bit of correction here...Now it is four lil treasures...i believe...

Awesome poem...really touching... makes me realize how important family is.

Ahem...a lil bit of correction here...Now it is four lil treasures...i believe...

Awesome poem...really touching... makes me realize how important family is.

I really like this poem. It flows very well, maybe except the last line. If you made it a little shorter, it would have been perfect. Despite that, though, you put a lot of feeling into it.

5/5

This is a beautiful poem. I commend your courage. Yous ond like a very brave woman. WIsh I could get the hang of it. Thank you for your comment!

Beautiful sentiments Cindy. Thay are indeed treasures!

Beautiful tribute to your grandchildren

I assure you, they surely will rem you forever....coz for them you are the only treasure... :o)
great write indeed, very emotional

all the best and take care of urself

Awesome poem. great words. 5/5

This poem is so adorable!

thanks very much for your comment!

Hello,
thank you so much for commenting on my poem. It means so much to me. That was a hard poem to write...kept crying...lol Well, anyway thank you so much! Also you are really very good! amazing work
Burning~Wing

How sweet, I'm glad something brings you joy in life! Keep up the good work, 5/5!! And thanx for the comments on my poems!
~*Danielle*~

Again, very moving, told simply yet beautifully.

Wow this is great! i can tell your grandbabies mean alot 2 u!! its wonderful.

Of all your work i've read this piece is sure to be the best! you did a terrific job on this one, i could almost see three little blonde girl bouncing on they're granny's knee! wow

Narc xxx