This is an amazing poem, we all have memories that we look back on at times, memories are what make us who we are. excellent write 5/5

Amazing! The imagery was fantastic, and as always, your vocab was great, too. Beautiful. =]

Wow.. this is such a sad and heartfelt write. You did an amazing job on writing this. I especially liked the last stanza. To me, it seemed the saddest and it was a really good way to end the poem. You did a really good job on describing everything in this also. I could really get the image in my mind and it added onto the sadness. Great job on this! 5/5

I liked it, it flowed well and rhymed wonderfully, i hate how memories make us smile and cry at the same time 5/5

Ah`mazing . It flowed well and I liked the rhyming . Made me think back to some old memories(: Well done` .
..__MiNDYY

Wow, this is really great. you have showed great efford in this poem, truly one of the best. 5/5

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This is another favourite, it was so sweet but yet so sad at the same time.
I think you did a wonderful job on this.

I really liked this. Your writing style is exquisite. After I read it I had to reread it because it was so good. 5/5

I totally rated a 5. i loved this poem more than words can describe. lord your just on a role all the time i never once found a poem of yours that didnt desereve a high rating.

Wow!!! i cant desricbe wow onderufl this poem really is!! keep it up.

~lilia~

Ohh myy gosh.. thats so cute && sadd at the same time.. a tear literallyy just fell down myy cheek =]

Now thats definatelyy a 5/5

Wow, I pretty much found that amazing. To make it so deep and make it flow as well...

"Stories are words arranged in an order. Poems are the best words arranged in the best order."

Although I can't live by those words quite yet, you definitely can. 5/5

Your writing is so beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this! Excellet job!

WOW...
one I love each and everyone of the lines you wrote in this poem...this poem is completely beautifully written...

THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM!! IT HAS GOOD MEANING AND A REALLY GOOD RHYME SCHEME...KEEP EM COMING!!!

Very well written poem. Very enjoyable.

Such sorrow. It leaves a lump in my throat.

It was great and had a nice flow to it. I'm glad that you gave Tara-Kay credit for the insperation. *5/5*

Alyson