I like this poem a lot....It's really deep, you have real talent, and I'm glad that you're sharing your talent with us...Keep up the good work... :) 5/5

I undertsand how u feel inside more then u could know, it's so hard to move on after we lose a love. amazing job 5/5

Amazing write, really... wonderful job, i loved the vocab in here! really excellent... same with your flow, just an absolutely beautiful poem... 5/5

Very well written from the heart and sad also.excellent job and eye opening too.

Wow. that was eally really good. like. well written, emoitonal, powerful. It was excellent. Great work!
-Suz xox

Veyr enotianal peace fo writing. You could almost feel the emotian pouring out of it. The imagery was excellent! Good useage of vocab, an excellent read! Very deep feelings. I think you could of used more punctuation but other then that an excellent read! Keep up the great work! xx

Great write. love can hurt so bad sometimes 5/5

I like the way you used complicated words. That's how a lot of deep poems should be. You expressed your feelings well here.

5/5

Wow you have alot to say and your tantled NICE JOBBBB!!!!!

Wow you have alot to say and your tantled NICE JOBBBB!!!!!

Wow this is very nice
the words you use are greattt

Wow, great poem, so well written... great flow and structure, very emotive and enjoyable to read, 5/5

Good poem, but i feel as if the reader needs a little more background information on what the speaker is feeling. Other than that, nice word use and nice flow.
5/5
~Stevie

Oh wow...this was so sad and touching.
A real pleasure to read, and i absolutely loved the imagery and vocabulary in this.
I don't know who voted it less than a 5, I think it is a well deserved 5.

Amazing! Once again, a very well-written poem! I loved the emotions in this. Sad, but great. I found nothing wrong with the poem, in fact I loved every part of it. Great job!
Hope to read more of your work =)
5/5