Comments : Last moments

  • 18 years ago

    by Jemma

    Very sad but really wel;l written.

    Thank you for your comments. They are much appreciated. And yes if i had a musical bone in my body i would love to put music to it but i'm afraid in that area I am hopeless.

    Jemma

  • 18 years ago

    by neverisme

    I dunno what should i say cuz this one reminds the pain and the loneliness when she,s gone by da way she havn't eve said goodbye

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is another awesome poem good job i love it i think u did a very good job and thx again for the ocmment on mine ttyl

    keenan