Listen

by messy   Dec 10, 2006


Listen closely you can hear
my heart thudding like a drum
then listen closer still, my dear
our two hearts, dum dum dum

Close your eyes, and just relax
and take one breath of me
I'll make you melt like candle wax
as I'm the nectar, you're the bee

Hold me tight in your embrace
and kiss me softly on the lips
brush your hand against my face
and down, then past my hips

Listen closely darling, as I hum
sweet, sweet nothings in your ear
what we're feeling isn't just for fun
we've found true love, it's crystal clear

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    "Close your eyes, and just relax
    and take one breath of me"
    I just love these lines, wow..this is so good! 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is na amzing poem with great flow, I know exactly how u feel, that feeling of love is so amazing. 5/5 no doubt. I favorited you, that poem was amazing and I want more excellent job hun

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight suicide

    Thats sick. Thats like one of the best poems iv read. very nice. 5/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Hold Me

    I realy liked this well done, xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow this is very good! 5/5!
    xoxo-am

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