Comments : Listen

  • 18 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow this is very good! 5/5!
    xoxo-am

  • 18 years ago

    by Hold Me

    I realy liked this well done, xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight suicide

    Thats sick. Thats like one of the best poems iv read. very nice. 5/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is na amzing poem with great flow, I know exactly how u feel, that feeling of love is so amazing. 5/5 no doubt. I favorited you, that poem was amazing and I want more excellent job hun

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    "Close your eyes, and just relax
    and take one breath of me"
    I just love these lines, wow..this is so good! 5/5!!