Mmm...I liked it...a bit creepy but I liked it

Lyrical. =] I like this alott. 5|5

All i can say is...wow! your style of writing is very good and I like the darkness in this poem...such emotion =)

5/5
~*Tess*~

Wow it werid but a good kinda weird you know keep up the work it is very good and you are a very good writer!

*~victoria~*

Love it! Your really pictures the condition in the world today, with such a dark simplicity that I can never seem to grasp in my writing.

Can't wait to see more!

~Amber

Wow beautifully written! thanx for my comment as well. it means a ton hearing from another point of view. sometimes i feel like im alone =]]. keep up the great work!! _Mya_