Never End

by *Amanda*   Dec 10, 2006


There's something between us
That we've both always felt
Every time I fall into your eyes, I can't help but melt

I never saw this coming, though
You and me
I never thought that we'd be anything, so I just let it be
but...

The night that you kissed me
I know there were sparks
I felt it from my head, down to my feet
You really made your mark.

Now I want to spend every hour
Every minute of every day
I love when we're together
You made me realize that there is amazing, but
There can always be better.

I still get confused when I think of us as an "us"
I know that nobody expected it,
but
I'm loving every bit

So tell me that I'm beautiful
and
Kiss my forehead again
because
Every second that I'm with you
I pray that it'll never end.

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    A very beautiful poem full of feeling.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dallas McNamara

    Other than that, it is a great poem. Sorry that this is two comments. Forgot to add this. LOL. PM me and we can talk about your poems or poems in general some more. :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Dallas McNamara

    Nice poem. You need to work on your wording a little bit. When you said "Now I want to spend every hour
    Every minute of every day
    I love when we're together
    You made me realize that there is amazing, but
    There can always be better." you never said you wanted to be with hi. I knew what you meant, but, it is somthing I would consider fixing. Just wannt help you out.

    ~Dallas~