This is a very good poem! I am sorry for your loss.Great job with the writing.

I really loved this poem, sarah. keep writing. =)

The first para just made me want to read it all. it made me hooked.

5/5 David

Awww I know what this feels like and u explained it perfectly nice job!!

I loved this poem, it's soo full of emotion. i can see where your coming from.

Short but meaningful.
Easy to relate to.

Your word choice is simple but fits perfectly with the overall mood of the poem.

Nice work! 5/5

Awww *tears up* short but to the point it's making me cry aww it's amazing, its reminding me of my friend who just committed suicide but it's still an amazing poem

~brittany (MD)

I understand now how you honestly write from the heart, and possible experiance? only way i can right lol! Very good job and it was short, but size doesnt matter when it hits this caliber, 5/5! =)

Awh this is real sad:[ but amazing writing! never stop writing poems because you are really good at it!

This poems really simple but it made an impact on me, The word choice seemed a little too commen but that didnt effect my thoughts on this poem. I found it to be amazing because the emotion was beautifully sad. Well done on a great piece. 5/5 ~mel

This poem is short, yet so effective that it made me want to cry, it so easily connected with me the pain of losing someone so close you you both emotionally and in a way, physically, so yeah i applaud you!! well done!!

Awhh this was real sad:[ but wonderfully written. i loved how it was real short but made a point and it was easy to understand.great job! 5/5

Excellent poem. It is sad and I can relate to it so much.

Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

Cute poem =]
xoxoxox

That was cute.. it sounded like a breakup to begin with but the last stanza aw thats sad..

This is sad!!! i am sorry. i really like it, it was well rhymed!!

It was very good touching poem it was sad aswell. a short poem so its just cath the intrest of reader.. i loved your poem. 5/5

It made my heart..cry...

Sad, but i love it ^^