I've never stopped believing ... there's a bit of Santa in everyone I know!

Luv the slight change in the fourth line of the first and last stanza. Really sets the poem. I'll check out a few more now.

I've not seen a poem on this kind of subject before.
This has a strong hidden message in it about the way kids might turn out to be how they are. But that just might be the way i'm reading it.
You kept up a brilliant flow throughout.
Excellent poem.
5/5
*Gem*

Oh my goodness! [Hugs you] This almost made me cry. However, I'm very upset right now, but this stole my heart.
It was as an 8 year old child were reading this poem to me. It was perfect. So sad.. I just, love it. I'm speechless. Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

LOVE IT!

Absoulutely fantastic!!! and straight from the heart .very well done .

Awwwwwwwwwwwww. That is sooo sad. I'm terribly sorry that happend to you.
I really hope you have a wonderful Christmas this year! God Bless you!
5/5

~*Tay*~

Very powerful write. great job

This was so touching yet so very sad! It brought tears to my eyes. Christmas can be a very hard time for many! Excellent write!

*Tears*
That was one of the saddest poems that I have ever read. I have never seen this type of poem done about Christmas and I have to say that you did a very good job with it.
Good flow and great job of filling the poem with emotions! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Very well done....perfect flow....perfect rhyme. A very sad look at the holiday.

Oh wow...this has tears in my eyes.
I thought this was really sad, but a pleasure to read.
The imagery and wording you used really captured me.

Wow that is an amazing poem.

and really sad too; i hope its not true...

Awesome poem, I really can feel the emotion in it.
5/5....and have the happiest Christmas you can possibly have :)

Santa clause isnt real he's he devil have you not ever noticed
SAiNT NiCHOLAS [[ exactly ]]

So amazing poem!

Ohh God. That was awesome. I loved the way you changed the last line a little, it closes the poem. The flow might have not been perfect, but that's totally dismissed due to the fact that it's so touching.

5/5