by Tylor Dent Dec 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Just when i started to lose faith. |
Should be and* instead of a in the first line. i really tlove the transfer of emotion it shows both sides of love nad PROVES the reality that love has its bad sides. I have a poem called I*It's Like Heaven, Like Hell Loving You* check it otu think you might liek it. again great stuff here. love ur creativity, keep expanding. |