Sweet Surrender

by Tammy   Dec 11, 2006


Bridled passion
fervent desire
rapidly becoming
a frenzied fire
destined to
devour my soul
frantically warring
self control
sultry motive
extreme need
certain destruction
forsaken creed
vicious burning
intense emotion
caustic to
self devotion
long awaited
sweet surrender
relishing in
passion's splendor

© Tammy Lively

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  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    You have my vote, always keep the love flowing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is really amazing-can't believe I haven't commented on it before. I love the set-up of 2 & 3 word lines, almost column like in form yet with a great flow and rhyme scheme. But it is the love and passion that shines through, this is heartfelt, touching, and beautiful in form, style, emotion and meaning. A truly excellent piece.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,
    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. I really like this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jeff

    Tammy,
    As great as usual.I am proud of you and happy to read such a well written poem from you.You are definetely a poet.Keep them coming and hey..drop me an email please!

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