This is really great, wow..I'm gonna check your other stuff out! Keep this up girl. |
by dora
Hey great words used in this poem. beautifully written. thank u heaps for ur comment on my poem. meant alot to me =] xx |
by Jeff
Tammy, |
by Rachel RTVW
Beautifully penned. I really like this one. |
This is really amazing-can't believe I haven't commented on it before. I love the set-up of 2 & 3 word lines, almost column like in form yet with a great flow and rhyme scheme. But it is the love and passion that shines through, this is heartfelt, touching, and beautiful in form, style, emotion and meaning. A truly excellent piece. |
by Fan Angeleo
You have my vote, always keep the love flowing. |
Wonderful!!! |