Comments : The Lady in Black...her name is she.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a story that should be told more often. It is so very sad when someone sees there only way out as suicide. You have told it well. Hoopefully by your writing it will help someone else. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    A dark yet beautiful poem, very moving and deeply sad. I'm sorry for your loss and i love the comment on justice, very true it appears that the victims get more punished and a longer sentence then the criminal! But karma is powerful. I enjoyed this poem and it was excellently written 5*

    Just a lil correction
    she is had a nervous break down, she decided to run away,*

    Should be, She Had.....

    Otherwise amazing poem!