Yeah I agree to James he already said what i wanted but this poem was really true man I love how you said that love can give us life when we are in the horible place 5/5

Shortnsweet *It can be the greatest
thing to happen to you,
it can be false
but it can be true.*

really loved that part

Good poem!!! keep writing.you have a true gift for writing!

This is a good poem not the best by you but this poem still has a wonderful flow soo good job and thx for the comment

keenan