Sit Up Straight

by *Charisma*   Dec 11, 2006


Shrugged shoulders, folded arms
Eyes that only see the ground
Unsteady walk, stuttering talk
Stays hidden so's not to be found.

Unconfident, insecure
Humble yes, but for reasons wrong
Never leads, only follows
Weakness shows, though she's strong

If she'd tilt her head to face the world
And stand up straight and proud
Put her arms at her sides
And speak a voice steady and loud

Then she'd gain the confidence
Insecurites disappear
She could be a leader in a group
And shed her greatest fears

And inside she knows her biggest fear
Is reaching all that she can be
And that's when I knew this timid girl
Has all along been me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I agree with EOE.
    You've hit the nail on the head with this one.
    You used such simple words to get your point across yet you still managed to hide a strong message between the lines.
    Amazing as always!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I've read so many poems with the end.."its me" but this is just so unqiue, the way u presented it and the selection of words...simply amazing

    all the best and take care