Comments : Sit Up Straight

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I've read so many poems with the end.."its me" but this is just so unqiue, the way u presented it and the selection of words...simply amazing

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I agree with EOE.
    You've hit the nail on the head with this one.
    You used such simple words to get your point across yet you still managed to hide a strong message between the lines.
    Amazing as always!
    5/5
    *Gem*