by Bianca
Like always great. i like it. especially the saying of the roses. keep it up. u're a great poet. |
This is great i love it... reminds me of my love |
by Goran Rahim
This is a great poem, very well written. i do like it alot.... |
by tinna
Thank you, it is beautifull as always.. |
by dora
Omg that was soo beautiful i loved it. beauifully written darl. i loved the structure the words chosen - just great =] keep up the great work. =] xx |
Thanks lol but my stuff is all original try and find where i copied those lines from please lol |
by Stephanie
Wow. That was a very beautiful and loving poem to read. This girl you write about is one very lucky lady, lol. Wonderful job writing this piece, keep it up! You have got a lot of talent as a writer. =] 5/5 |
by SECRET
Darn it guy!!-- u really r good! |
by Sab
Good job ,, your a good poet !!! pls be my friend!! |
by Lecrissa
WOW!!!!! Love the flow and If my hubby could write like that or even think to get me a card like it I would forgive him anything. |
This is an amazing poem karl. Full of love. I think its so sweet... roses.. one fake... love you when all die... *sigh* cuteeeeee defintally my favorite stanza is the last. Your vocab is simply amazing and your rhyming! wow... |
by samantha
Thanks for the comment, I think we are both lucky to have the best people possible for us. this is a great poem 5/5 |
by ForeverYoung
Wow! so beautiful!!! |
Wow. that was really sweet : ) i loved the flow, it was absolutely flawless. The last stanza was incredible. 12 real, 1 fake.... until the last oen dies etc.... Brilliant. |
by Jenni Marie
I adore this one. |
by PURE HEART
Wow! dats so sweet and loving......good job dear! 5/5 |
by Bryan
Great poem karl, 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
The ending with the real roses and one fake -- It`s from a quote I read somewhere . This had emotion and it was so sweet ! Just so adorable . Good write . |
by Deana
This was great ,I loved the idea of the one fake rose that never dies, great idea. |
by Deana
This was great ,I loved the idea of the one fake rose that never dies, great idea. |