You said its bad, but i think its really good. Good job.
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Omg girl...it's not bad at all...you wrote that in only 5 minutes?...unbelievable...5/5.

For a five min poem, it's amazing, lol
It's the poems that are written in the heat of the moment that turn out to be so good.
This is no exception =)
well done
5/5
*Gem*