I really like this one. Some parts i found myself relating to. good job.
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An interesting write. I think that the rhythm and flow is a little choppy, but I like the emotion and the concept of "nobody's someone". I think that if you concentrated the emotion, that it would be a much more gripping and powerful piece. Not necesarily make it longer, just more heartfelt. I think that it is very nice how it is as well though, just a suggestion. 4/5

I LOVE YOUR TITLE, OH AND THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS YOUR THE ONLY ONE THATS COMMENTED SO FAR IT FEELS GOOD TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!
XOXO,ERIN

Oh gee!this is your best so far. i am so giving it a 5. and a 5 tomorrow. i want the rating to go up. this is a great poem.

i loved the way you wrote it and how you finished it all off. the words you used were just so fit for this poem.

i will vote every day till it reaches the rating 4.3. it needs that, at least.

David

That was sooo good!..i loved it!..thanks for the comment and your poems are amazing tooo!!..comment back!! 5/5

I really like this poem, it's very touching!

<3, Leah

This is amazing... i wish i could write that well!!

If you get a chance read the one on my file of sailors broken heart

Love the last verse... i can totaly relate to it.. if only we could lie to ourselves and believe it anyway 5/5

Very good one...I like the way you think

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love it if u checked out some of my poems.... 5/5

Nazeer

Wowza thats pretty deep :) it is very good gratz on it :}