by Krzysztof J Dec 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
***Before you read the following please NOTE that it is incomplete, the day i finish it and post it i will no longer be here, thats why its not finished! not yet and i hope i don't finish it anytime soon, but things are tough!!!! I'm still holding on*** |
by Mary Wismer
You just penned it so beautiful, sad but written well. thanks for sharing :) |
by Georgia
I love it its so meaning full |
This poem was really sad.i loved it. |
by Aussie
This got my complete attition. it flows so well and deep. near the end made me think. i like how u made it soo detailed. this poem seems that ur talking twords one person. ur poetry is amazing. PLZ keep writing |
by Jen
Awww it was so sad and upsetting, even though it is unfinished it is still really really good i loved reading it, but this stanza, |