Comments : Bath Water

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

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    this is lovely.
    ps i called jeffrey a jizz face x

  • 17 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Ahem. Part of my poem is in this poem.
    but this is my favorite by you. Of all time.

  • 17 years ago

    by Millions

    LOVED IT, plus, i love that song... xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    "all i want to play is the saddest songs"
    Stole my general idea.
    Baha. You're a violent one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    You meant to comment the poem the title was actual used in. :] Wrong poem, sweetheart. Try the next one up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    In the poem it says.. LET THE FEVER PLAY. That was how I used it in "Breathing By Wires". Selective Hearing was something my mum said to me. So I put it in a poem. Vain, much?

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    HAHA@YOURFACEB!T*H.

  • 17 years ago

    by Reggie Jay

    This was really good...you have a thing for long poems but I stay interested so its good.

    great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Daddy wud u lyk some more sausages? reggie jay said it all