Comments : Living Life My Own Way

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Awwww nice poem woo for the confidence growth of Gem =]=]=]

    great poem 5/5 as always

    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice sweet poem. It's really cool.

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Yet another beautifull poem :)))

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Hey,
    Just a thanks for the help in that stanza. I kept thinking it was off. That helped it flow much better! Thank you. This one was well-written with a happy beat to it, like accepting yourself. But of course, sometimes others suggestions can be helpful.
    Must've been your "mood." JK lol
    Have a good one!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    That was great. i think many people will also relate to that one. anyway um great job on this .. expressed urself really g0od =] keep it up 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by anthony

    Yea thats what im talking about
    nice 1 i like this one alot lot
    PEACE
    Anthony

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Hey
    superb, what a great positive attitude. Brilliant poem, very happy and upbeat!!

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "Instead of listening to my head
    I listen to my heart"

    This couplet is soo inspiring! I love it! The whole poem flowed nicely and in the end...it was a great poem! Love it!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I like it good rythem and great messae..i agree i mean were suppsoe ot live to please God but he wants us to be happy so whats life if were not happy, you really gotta do what u want to do to make it all worth whille..keep it up

    lissa