by The Sky is Falling Dec 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
They tease me every day, |
I like this one, this is really good!xoxo |
by Vegetable
This is very nice. You kept a really sympathetic tone through out the whole thing. You compared the pain of emotion/verbal teasing beautifully. The only suggestion I have is, although your word choice was good, the rhymes were a bit predictable. Overall great job. |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, I really liked it, the flow was god and it was full of meaning, good job. |