by Jenni Marie Dec 11, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
All the words in the world |
by Dacey Flame
Thats so sweet. I wish my little brother was little like that. Maybe be then he'de be more lovable. It did kinda seem like you were struggling for words, and that you had a lot more then you wrote to say. On a lot of poems this doesnt work and makes it not so great, but here I think its works. It really helped to get your point across. |
by Bryan
This is a very good poem, it has a great flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
by Darien
Wow, I actually liked karl's comment. That really does suit this poem. Well done. |
The strongest love is a love we can't describe amazing write 5/5 |