My Last Crimson Tear

by myshiningstar14   Dec 11, 2006


Held like a prisoner
in my own mind,
the earth pedals
beneath me,
trying to break me
as I fall.

Shaken by the feelings
within, murdered by the
look on your face
whenever I fail you.

Seeing what no one
could see,
making me be all I
can be.
Seeing what nobody
saw,
you looked past the
flaws and helped turn
my imperfections inside-
out.

It's only a matter of time
before I cry...
my

last

crimson

tear.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "you looked past the
    flaws and helped turn
    my imperfections inside-
    out."

    Thats the kind of the thing the person who you fall in love is best at.
    They make us feel like the most beautiful girls on earth =)
    Well done, i loved it
    5/5
    *Gem*