This one has a great concept and an good flow to it.
The only thing i'd change is; "I try to fly, but fall without my wings" To something like "Once again I failed to do the right thing; "I try to fly, but fall with no wings"
Just to tidy up that stanza, but hey! Works fine the way it is anyway =) I'm just nitpicking cos i'm in a mood, lol.

"Because I'm fixing what I know I've broken."

Poignent (sp?) ending note. Nicely done.
5/5
*Gem*
(and yeah the bleh was cos i didn't like it, i could have gone in more detail but like i mentioned above, i was in a mood, lol)

This was a great poem one of my faves for sure at least from you it was good cuz i liked the way you put it and the rhyming and the words just great lol godo job keep it up 5/5

Wow.. i can tell this is a very heartfelt poem.. the emotion behind these words are really strong... amazing write..