Comments : Smile,princess

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelso

    I know exactly how you feel there are so many things to tell about me that so many don't know. I really liked it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, i like your poetry style. you are great and keep up the great work. 5/5 i will be looking forword for ur new poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow great piece really sad just edit the words that you cut like u (you) to make this greater ill give you 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bryan

    Ok, great poem, but the 5th/8th line should be (all) not (ol) but other than that its perfect, your very talented, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    I will not critisize i will praise because im absolutely shocked with your poems because they are really true....

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    I will not critisize i will praise because im absolutely shocked with your poems because they are really true....

  • 18 years ago

    by Cathy

    Aww this is a sad poem but beautifully written, I give it a 5 by the way thank you for commenting on my poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a very good poem. We always try to hide our feelings from others putting on a false face for the world. I hope writing helps to relive some of your sadness. It has been a great thing for me! Praying for you. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by xXMikansexNoxGuiltXx

    This was really well written in a way i had a similar poem like it but i deleted it *rates 5/5* it was great *puts on fave's*

  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is awesome good job i love it u did a good job but even princesses have a right to cry lol good job i like it and thx for the comment on mine :D

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Tina

    Hunny i have to say that poem smile, princess is amazin .. U have a great sense of style of writing ... i can abouslety connect with that poem .. and its rue Princesses never cry