This is touching. and very well written. thanks for the comment on my poem, btw

Wow very touching poem and yet beautifully penned, I just Notice that You wrote I's in small letter and you cut words like ur (your) if you can chnge it this poem become greater, BTW welcome to the club and nice poem

Gene Ross

Great poem with a great didication. it is sad, but the reality of life. we have to be stronger that the destiny. i know how u feel.

great job and a 5/5 from me.

Sorry for your loss, this is a very good poem raven, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

AMAZING!!!....by the way sorry bout ur mother...

What a wonderful tribute to your mother! I also lost someone very dear to my heart! it has been very hard without him! My prayers are with you! great job!

A great tribute to someone you love
A powerful message is in this piece
Well done
Marcus

Hi, how are you? i dunno if you still want to comment on my afr work - but heres the link: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=237657