I like this poem...it's sad but well written. keep it up

I read this wone yestuday in english... 5/5..

Wow i love this poem i can feel the sorrow in it and i could relate to it so much. i've not got many poems but i think u'd relate to them as well so if u have time check them out and comment please, thanks
keep it up

The emotions all there. The empathy and meloncholy as well. But it lacks structure. Something to give the reader an idea when to pause and ponder. At first i would suggest before each "Remeber me" as it would tie each stanza together, but then i noticed there are other "remembers" towards the end and those will distract the reader from the headings. If you want it to be bold, which a topic like this is meant to be bold to prevent others from doing the same, it should have something that pops. "remeber me" should pop. if there are similar phraseology it will blur anddraw the readers eye away from the heading.

Loved it. I loved view of the person in the poem. Life is hard. I'm sorry for your friend. Life is just too hard on some people
Hopefull wishes
Emma