Final Goodbye

by marcelah   Dec 11, 2006


These are my last words for you.
I'm turning my back,
This is the last you'll hear of me;
There's no going back.

My feelings are still here,
Barely hanging on.
I can't take this anymore,
Soon these feelings will be gone.

My feelings were strong and true;
I meant every word I spoke.
I never did lie, not to you,
I'm not turning back now.

No matter what you say,
This is where I'll stand,
I don't care for your apologies;
This I can promise you, this I know for sure.

I'm leaving now,
I'm taking my pride, you're the one that lied.
Our memories are wasteful, they're painted black in my mind,
This is it... my final goodbye.

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  • 18 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    I must say, it's really good. But remember, if you use the same word over and over again, it'll become a bore, and not to mention, sound weird. But I also liked the other word choice you used. Maybe, try next time, to make the flow a little more smoother.

    I have nothing else to say other than that.

    =] Great jobb. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by mimzy

    This was beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Cancer.

    Very nicely said

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Great poem! Love it!
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a touching piece. very well written. thank u for the comment on my poem meant alot xx