by marcelah Dec 11, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
These are my last words for you. |
I must say, it's really good. But remember, if you use the same word over and over again, it'll become a bore, and not to mention, sound weird. But I also liked the other word choice you used. Maybe, try next time, to make the flow a little more smoother. |
by mimzy
This was beautiful |
by Cancer.
Very nicely said |
Great poem! Love it! |
by dora
Hey darl a touching piece. very well written. thank u for the comment on my poem meant alot xx |